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| Taylor 2004-06-19 ch 1,  | hey Sara... I read this one and thought like weew... damn I hate writing reviews... but hey I could probly talk to you bout this stuff next time I see ya, hows that sound. ... anywho Ill rap this up... take care Sara and later --Taylor-- |
| joshua 2004-06-05 ch 1, | hey great job this actually made feel something |
| Jessica 2004-05-19 ch 7, | HEHEH Soft core porn JK HEHEHE Can't stop :D Anyways good jobie Sarah Berah See you tomorrow BYE BYE Don't miss me too much :D |
| dani boi 2004-05-17 ch 6, | hi hi sarah, good good keep it up. lol ur a good author. cant wait till ur done the next chapter...and we WILL find a song :P byebye |
| travis 2004-05-17 ch 1, | hey ... awesome job with the stories... keep it up. :D |
| JR-newcastle 2004-04-30 ch 1, | this story show a fantastic example of ur brilliant writing skills the language and the dept of the detail is extrodinary, u are one of the best writers i hve seen and i think if u keep this fantastic standard up u will go far and i am 100% sure u will become a famous writer one day and i will look forward to reading ur work |
| DA MASTER 2004-04-26 ch 4, | YEAH YEAH GOOD JOBIE KEEP WRITING BYE LOVA FROM YOUR BESTEST BUD PS IT'S JESSICA |
| Nikkers 2004-04-20 ch 4, | OH, so where is the sex?? just kiding, this is really good Smac's me gal...(hahah that sounds funnie) SO Scott and Maggie eh?? well i cant wiat till the next chapter!! TOOTLES See ya @ soccer |
| kyle 2004-04-15 ch 2, | Good it has you wondering if it’s a different book in the first part but gets cleared up farther in not quite as emotional as chapter 1 but all in all a good chapter |
| Nick Foreman 2004-04-15 ch 3, | Your aare good at this. You ever think of acctuly writing? Either way i like the story so far and the whole song thing you got going on here. I can't wait til lyou finish it off it'd make a good short story. |
| Nikki 2004-04-15 ch 2, | Hey, this is really good. And i cant wiat until the next chapter.. I would reveiw more but im missing Hockey..lol TTYL TOOTLES |
| tim 2004-04-15 ch 2, | omg babe.this story is soo good its actually giving me feelings somehow.but dont stop here make atleast 2 more chapters.k babe? i love you soo much (K) |
| Strider Evenstar 2004-04-15 ch 1,  | sarah! that was good...i guess its just a one shot? anyways its good just like ur good (yet tramaticly depressing) poems!! lol. so ttul...well im actually talking 2u rihgt now. byebye |
| Nick Foreman 2004-04-15 ch 1, | wow your really good at this you know that? It's kinda sad but true all at the same time. You gotta finnish it. Good job! |
| kyle 2004-04-15 ch 1, | A very emotional chapter in what looks to be a good book when completed kutos to you |