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| makethedeathcountxx 2004-06-14 ch 3, | CONTINUE ,GOING GOOD |
| Colleen 2004-06-10 ch 3, | This seems like it could be really great! |
| Pippin's Pheonix Feather 2004-04-22 ch 1, | not write more...thats a funny one...you NEED to continue...its maditroy...:sad eyes: please? |
| Georgie Pantazis 2004-04-16 ch 1, | You should definetly continue with this story. But my suggestion is change it to a first person perspective. Since it revolves mostly around Sander, it would have a much more meaningful effect. Also, don't start every paragraph with Sander, Sander, Sander... gets repititive. Keep it up :) |
| D. Wilder 2004-04-16 ch 1, | once again lovely story. keep it up. and thanks for reviewing my story! |