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Reviews For: Pushing down his walls

makethedeathcountxx
2004-06-14
ch 3,
CONTINUE ,GOING GOOD
Colleen
2004-06-10
ch 3,
This seems like it could be really great!
Pippin's Pheonix Feather
2004-04-22
ch 1,
not write more...thats a funny one...you NEED to continue...its maditroy...:sad eyes: please?
Georgie Pantazis
2004-04-16
ch 1,
You should definetly continue with this story. But my suggestion is change it to a first person perspective. Since it revolves mostly around Sander, it would have a much more meaningful effect. Also, don't start every paragraph with Sander, Sander, Sander... gets repititive. Keep it up :)
D. Wilder
2004-04-16
ch 1,
once again lovely story. keep it up. and thanks for reviewing my story!
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