One of the most beautiful poems/songs I've ever read...Have you ever considered turning these beautiful words into music? Maybe you should give that a thought, because the right kind of music will add to, rather than detract from the sheer emotional outbreak of your words.

The last line ended it perfectly. Great work!

This one is really good, it's scary but I can relate to it and I know people who can. The words portray the emotions perfectly

It doesn't suck. I like it and I really liked the beginning.your faithful reviewer,Allie(And I"m sure I"m annoying too)

Very creative and unique. Beautiful too. Please keep writing.

It's kind of sad but it's a good depressing, really makes you think.

"It's all a memoryAnd it never ends like your memory Memories."Your work is really fun to figure out. Great flow and perfect wording.Write for eternity!~Allie~

Your writing is really creative and it's deep, no matter what it says I can still see it being played on the radio or a cd. Great work!

Yay! Now I will go and bug the friends into reading them. I'll be on the alert for the next chapter of Unfair Odds. Hope you enjoyed your break though, I missed you!

I liek it... it flows really nicely...

I've been singing since last night. Against my will. Trust me, I'm in a chior and we have to be on tv tomorrow. And yet, I just HAD to sing this song. It's awesome.

wow that's beautiful!! really it is ^_^ you're a very very very good writer =]

I noticed you've been putting up more songs. It's nice.
I almost started crying when I read this. It's beautiful, and true, and it just touches you. Or at least it touched me. This is one of my favorites of your songs without a doubt. They just keep getting better.

^-^ My sistah,
I did not think you would right something so..beautiful. Actually, I didn't expect you to right something like this. I suppose it just came out of you huh? XD Anyways keep writing poems/songs, I like to read them! Especially the stories!!

You've written better, I know that. But it's still good. I think I like the third verse the best this time.