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| KELLY4SVS 2005-04-03 ch 2,  | abuseyeh theres a few mistakes not many though, not much too review but sounds good i will read on. |
| KELLY4SVS 2005-04-03 ch 1, | abusethoughs is spelt those but otherwise sounds good |
| AlienRiceBall 2004-04-18 ch 2, | abuse^.^ Very nice introduction.. I really enjoyed the intensity of feelings, and emotions between the characters. You could actually tell that each character has a special type of relationship towards each other. I saw a few mistakes like you said, but not many, so that is good. I am really enjoying this story, and I do hope that you keep up the great work. ...^.^... |
| AlienRiceBall 2004-04-16 ch 1, | abuseOmg... I can't believe that you would do somthing so horrible to me... no... The shortness... lol... J/k I really can't wait to see what will happen. I have so many questions running around in my head right about now... like, what will Mallik do? Will he ever know what it is like to have a little mallik, of his race..T.T.. wait...he is the last of his race..no Will he ever get to eat doughnuts? eheh... ignore that.. I have a craving for them...^.^ No, but really... I can't wait until you update.. Oh.. and could you tell when the manga is posted.. I want to read that too.. heheh... ...^.^... |
| Neil Hazel 2004-04-16 ch 1, | abuseCOOL STORY CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER L0OK IF U DON'T MIND CAN U R@R MY STORY PLASW GREAT STORY |