cool story.

good story so far, i really like the historical aspect. am yet to see the link to "romance" but im sure its coming

continue

I love it, I think it's the perfect period story. The little twist with the ribbon has really set it off and now I'm curious as to what it means.
Like usual, you're writing rocks!

Excellent work! Very nice descriptions.
Please continue!

wow, very descriptive and well-written! Keep it up!
Chandi