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| Cymoril Avalon 2004-10-14 ch 1,  | abuseHuh. Seems a little short and incomplete to me. It leaves me feeling there should be more. *grins and pokes* Hint hint? |
| mizutenchi22 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseIts short and sweet..but I didn't find much meaning to it. I like your last line "Make my soul play"..but it needs just a little more meat. Adding one more line that denotes its significance (such as an image) would help. |
| JustForgetMe 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseyour poems are so short but so good. |
| Flinch of Sane 2004-07-30 ch 1, | abuse*tips hat* I love it! It's short but definetly says a lot. You're able to write these short poems that hold so much meaning and when others right they go full length with a lot of details. But YOURS is just amazing,a memorable moment and a stong emotional feeling, all, in four lines. Keep it up. Hope to read more. *salutes* :-D - How do you get so many reviews?¿ and thanks for reviewing my poem. *nods* |
| Argantlyn 2004-07-25 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! |
| CrimsonEnchantress 2004-06-25 ch 1, | abuseooh, its another one of those, incredibly short, but full of emotion. nice and sensuous *as you can see, i have a lot of time on my hands. by the way, how do you manage to get so many reviews?* |
| genny marie 2004-06-19 ch 1, | abusei read all your poems in five minutes and i love them, they are short but sweet and very well written with some deeper meanings, great poetry. XOXO Meg |
| beve 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abusehey i like this--nice short use of words to explain something big and yet not destroying the whole story behind it |
| xXShattered ButterflyXx 2004-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseShort and sweet! I love it! THANKS FOR THE REVIEW! |
| Sillygoose49 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet, and I'm glad to see one that isn't angry or sad. Sometimes that all I can write, sad or angry things, but you need to write happy things sometimes too, don't you agree? Again, another well written and expressed poem. |
| Birdaloo 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abusei dontlike the last line on this one, but other than that its great! |
| Breaking Heart 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseso,maybe i really don't like this one as much?...well,can you blame me?it's very short and it makes sense,but i'm just not getting it here. irish lover |
| katmonkey 2004-05-23 ch 1, | abuseShort, sweet and awesome imagery! : ) *lime-girl* |
| Kiss-and-Die 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abusewild. i like how you play with words. |
| whyt forest 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuse*closes eyes as imagery comes flooding in* i don't know how u do it but u can express so much with such a small amount of words. oh i don't know. maybe the poem taps into how i feel or rather want to feel. *drifts off* |