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| Spector'sGirl 2005-04-21 ch 1,  | abuseI'm definitly showing this to my piano playing friend - it describes her perfectly. |
| Cymoril Avalon 2004-10-14 ch 1, | abuse...what? Is this abour a sadist? O_o For some reason, even though the "character" is female, this poem makes me think of Yami no Bakura from Yu-gi-oh. I guess some people express their love in...odd ways. |
| mizutenchi22 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abusePERFECT. I absolutely LOVED it..THIS is what I'm talking about. Images, emotion, description..simply perfect. Nice work! |
| Topaz Waters 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abuseShort but effective; I think it would be better if you hinted what it was about in the title though, to avoid mixups...And you should put apostrophes where they belong. I love it though, it's an awesome poem. :) |
| Avery Rose 2004-07-21 ch 1, | abuseo it's moving...truth in words |
| LuthienLuin 2004-07-15 ch 1, | abuseHey, thanks for the review on Beethoven's Moonlight. :D I got this poem immediately - it must be a shared understanding we pianists have b/c I noticed a lot of other readers were unsure of the meaning. I think it describes the feeling perfectly of the pianist and how the outsiders view them as well - the simplicity gives it power and I like the phrasing. -Adds to faves- -LuthienLuin |
| CrimsonEnchantress 2004-06-25 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. kinda vague. i didn't get that it was about a girl and her piano either. |
| Pai927 2004-06-18 ch 1, | abuseAre you speaking of a girl touching the piano keys and "in love" with the music she creates? |
| beve 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseit seems a little barbaric at first...but its good after i read it a few times--thanks for reviewing my poem |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abuseI love it! The simplicity in your poetry is very attractive and catches the eye. GREAT JOB! |
| Sillygoose49 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Do you play the piano, or is this a friend you are describing? When you refer to "them", are you referring to the piano keys? Another very good poem. Sillygoose |
| Birdaloo 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuselove is such a rusty, tarnished thing |
| Prince of Mirkwood 2004-05-18 ch 1, | abusenice job! =) |
| Kiss-and-Die 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis made me smile. |
| whyt forest 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuseshort and to the point, whilst not blatantly stating the point. *thumbs up* ~whyt forest~ |