You don't really need such frightening Disclaimers, your copywright is provided with thr Bern convention automatically.

Wow, that was a good beginning to a hopefully great story. Just one suggestion though, and that would be longer chapters. Short chapters are hard to read and it's hard to follow the plotline. Maybe an average of 10 - 20 words would make a good chapter. Other than that, I congratulate you on a job well done. If you have time, check out "The Search" and R&R! =)