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| Cymoril Avalon 2004-10-14 ch 1,  | abuseO_o Is this about suicide, or am I being too dense? I seriously think you could write some terribly poignant song lyrics if you tried. And yes, I'm totally reading and reviewing all of your poetry, cause I noticed you reviewed one of my works a while back and I never got around to checking yours out. Laziness is all I can blame it on. |
| mizutenchi22 2004-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI can totally relate..I love this poem..I feel like I'm there. Great job! A+ |
| JustForgetMe 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abusevery good and interesting.keep it up. |
| CrimsonEnchantress 2004-06-25 ch 1, | abusethis is really long compared with your other ones, and extremely vivid. Its quite a change from all the other short ones that take a lot of personal interpretion, and this metaphorical, imaginative piece of writing. i like how you have 'untitled' as the theme, though I don't really understand it. |
| Angelic Hellraiser 2004-06-13 ch 1, | abuseCOOL! The raw emotion is well distributed here. |
| Sillygoose49 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abuseWas the title intentionally "untitled" or was it because you couldn't think of a title? Your poems are a bit angry, I hope everything's going okay. This is very well written and expressed, and I truly can't wait to read more of your poems. Sillygoose |
| Birdaloo 2004-06-08 ch 1, | abusewouldnt it be nice to actually be untitled? to juts be so much of nothing that you could walk by and have everyone lok right through you? wow... |
| Breaking Heart 2004-06-04 ch 1, | abuseso,this is about your poem?... that's...different.it's LONG,too.well,what can i say to that?... good job,but keep trying with new things.imagery is fine,but only if you can use it right everytime.try more stuff. irish lover |
| Kiss-and-Die 2004-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWoah. This is an amazing piece. Awesome. Really. |
| oasispegasus 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abuse*jaw hits floor* im speechless! |
| whyt forest 2004-05-03 ch 1, | abusei know this is obvious but it's very beautifully sorrowful i.e. bittersweet. gods that's a good poem. ~whyt forest~ |
| imxnotxyourxstar 2004-05-02 ch 1, | abuseWow...this has left me speechless. The imagery is incredible, I really love your stuff. Keep up the great work! ~Lsay312 |
| manipulated observations 2004-04-27 ch 1, | abusepersonification . . . hyperbole . . . imagery . . . such IMAGERY! i love you FPO do you still write stories as well? |
| Zero-Sum 2004-04-21 ch 1, | abusei love all of your stuff! >mysterykittyx |
| sigelger 2004-04-21 ch 1, | abuseWOW! Can't breathe no breath (joke) but it was breath taking thank u for sharing that with me all hate and no love (what that sounds a bit like me) sorry i always write little things in brakets it's a way i share what i'm thinking (but y it's stupid wait i'm doing it again) hope this review makes u smile Blessed Be SI |