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Writer in the Shadows 2004-06-22 . chapter 1
Is this perhaps written from a real-life experience? It holds so much emotion. Some writers just write, but you, Carrie, write what you feel. That's why your poems are so wonderful, because they've got the emotion behind it. As always, I love what you've done in this poem.
There are a few spots where you seem to get a little wordy, something I see in a lot of your poems, but it's nothing too big that ruins the effectiveness of the poem.
Great job!
Summerkins 2004-04-23 . chapter 1
hm...'you' wouldnt happen to be your dan would it? cause if it isb i'll come over and kick his bum!! :P
Aylae 2004-04-18 . chapter 1
wow. You depict your emotions soo well. I am sure that many people (like me) go through this yet are afraid to put it into words or confront it. (i am) its a truely lovely poem.
A Chroi 2004-04-16 . chapter 1
Wow. This is beautiful. I love the way you describe the feelings so well. It's so clear...Keep writing.
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