Bella Vengence 2004-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseI LIKE THE WAY U DESCRIBE THE MOVEMENT OF THE PEOM. AWESOME WORK. |
xLecta 2004-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseI like the maturity in this poem. |
Ria Mala 2004-04-16 ch 1,  | abuseHehehe, sex poem. *Giggles*
On a more mature note, nice work. It's cool how you described it. |