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Shadow of Silver 2004-04-21 . chapter 1
I like this one too, except that it seems more of a free verse than a rhyming poem. But this one verse "Spring peepers softly sing again". What exactly is a peeper? A rose or a plant perhaps? Otherwise it's great, you've done it again!
But by the way, what does A/N mean anyway?!
Midnight Rain 2004-04-16 . chapter 1
I like your rhyming technique, and I think the two stanzas fit well together. Keep Writing!
-Liz
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