To say I wasn't jealous of your talent would be lying. You're just so good! I love it!
Hawke

I applaud your ability to say something, while still staying in rhyme, and iambic pentameter. Good job.

Great poem, as usual! Fave lines have to be: "Once I felt Love amongst Lies and Tears, Cupped Joy in hands amongst a thousand Fears," Well done! :)

it's not an actual sonnet, but it's a very nicely written twelve-line poem. If you'd like to know, the rhyming scheme for a sonnet is a-b-a-b-c-d-c-d-e-f-e-f g-g. I still like this very much. "Cupped Joy in hands amongst a thousand Fears" was a very nice line.
agid

wow... nice! heh! and i get to review first, *thanks author alerts* :P:D its a really really really good poem. keep it up!
Echo Despise