I loved this chapter best of all. The fairies are awesome, and the liberal-conservative thing was a humorous touch. This story is so fun to read.

I liked how the queen is happier now, and not as depressed as the beginning with the coming of the baby. I can't wait to see what the fairies do!

"Err... don't you think her teeth are rather, well, disgustingly pearly white? And look at that hair. I could swear it has been, err, combed within the past two weeks. Like I said, disgusting."

That line was hilarious. It was a good chapter. I love the conversations between the king and queen-they're not your typical monarchs.

I really like this. Your style is very light and humorous, without being random. I really want to continue this. It sounds very promising, and the hygeine thing was really funny.

~temblance

p.s. I am writing my own sleeping beauty story too, so I love reading how other people percieve the fairytale.

lollollol! This was great! I love all your little comments in parenthesis - they're hillarious! This is awesome!

Good continuation, nothing to add.

Uh Oh, can see trouble coming here. Good continuation.

Nice, you have a light touch.

Interesting beginning - an almost egalitarian society (despite being a royal one!). You need 'principles' not 'principals.'

Aww! This was very cute and I quite enjoyed reading it. The detail was fabulous, and I loved all the little royal workers. A few grammatical errors, but all in all great work. Too bad it wasn't finished.

Lovely and descriptive.
Keep writing! I can't stand the suspense!!

*laughing* I love your story! You're good at this humor thing, especially the first two chapters.
In this chapter, all the comments in parentheses make it a little confusing to follow. You might watch and make sure you need all the info you put in parentheses, or if there's a clearer way to word things.
Other than that, it's a great story! Keep writing!

lol. wonder wat the evil fairy's gonna gift her with. traffic lights?

Very origional! Ilove it!

Anything but the fairies...
^^ Keep up to good work.
-Cindy Moon *)