Kel! Great sequel to the one about Alana! Coolness. She's like you. Keep up the good work.

Haha! This is the Amora I know! Excellent! I like this one... You are a feminists dream, 'Chelle. Great, I like how abbreviated it is, the lines I mean. Very nice!

REPRESENT FOR THE WOMEN! your poem rocks, because it not only shows men where woman are geographically on the world (speaking metaphorically) but it also shows that they are a force not to be reckoned with! as Tamora Pierce fans, you and i definitely relate through this work on more than one level, and others are bound to feel its' power and message too!

Wow! This is good, and it sends a powerful message. No more dominant testosterone!

-yay- first to review ALL your new poems :-)
and ALL of them are great! keep up the good work,
( btw, this one is in that all great work thingy)
and I will try to get chapter 1 of Book II up soon.l thanks and peace.

Ah! A smaller type of feminist poem...even though, I am a guy, I found this poem very inspiring. Please keep writing. Good luck and I love the last line. Take care!

Wahoo woman power! haha this rocks. Good job.