I'm sorry it took me so long to return your review...I really like this piece, it's excellent. The repetition is very effective and I like your overall concept. I can relate to it, in a way. Great job; keep writing.

That is really really good! I absaloutly love it! So sad, but good

I love that last line.
The poem strikes close to home as well. I can easily identify...

Wow! That's amazing. It really seems to have meaning to it.