A little more than half way done and I'm still managing somewhat decent reviews. SCORE! *ahem* Yeah...emotional and a bit angsty. Seems to show a fear of the future and the past. Nice!
Hawke

beautiful, beautiful...I gotta say tho, in just a few weeks and you've already got 21 fans! What a great achievement! What's your secret to fast-fame? Hehe, I sound like an interviewer don't I? Well, I"m just here to offer my congrats, so CONGRATULATIONS!
summerdazed

*applauds* Very good, I liked this one a lot! :)

very deep. its good, nice.

This is a topic almost anyone can relate to. I like how the lines get progressively longer.
agid