Meep...
It may be just a leetle too early in the morning for me to be making sense i in reviews, ergo forgive randomness, yes?
I'm sensing a theme in poetry. Of you and him on a beach, discussing meaningful things. And then something very sad.
*hugs*

Great entry. If I could choose between having all of the wonders of the world revealed before me and reading one more sentence of your entry I would hesitate... and then choose your story.
Your story is like a beam of light coming from the heavens to show us thy christ dost among thou.
R&R My entries. Peace!