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we cOuLd hAve hoUrs oF fuN doIn thIngs.

First of all can I say this, I love the way almost every line rhymes with the next. Secondly have you ever thought about singing in a band? I would so buy your cd's. Too many songs these days have no rhyme that makes sense together yours does. you could make zillions for these lyrics! Excelent Job! Loove Always~Kaylee~ Bussions lol

o this is dark and really well written. i liked the last line...

*Silent Writer*

Thank you for your review on 'In a Haunted Cemetery'

I loved the whole thing, maybe even my favorite of yours, although I liked Black/Vanilla too..."I keep on falling (Yeah)'Cause I'm not smart enough.I keep on falling (Yeah)'Cause I'm not nice enough.I keep on falling (Yeah)'Cause I'm ** up." was definalty my favorite part...the whole thing was rather good, again i say you should start a band if your not already in one, if yu dont sing you should definatly write for one, maybe even market these if you wanted. they are really good, your very talented. See you laterForever, Alice

That's a very different idea. I've never thought of anything like that. I don't quite understand the hiding of the soul to get to heaven... unless that the soul isn't so innocent as it was thought to be... I like the "That way I'll get to heaven, I'll finally get to heaven, heaven yeah." sounds like an excited child! ^.^ *write on*

Not a single complaint, well I never have one with your work so just keep it up! Perfectly written, too.

Hey! I'm too lazy to login, hehe. Sorry I haven't been reviewing...I've been so busy with Driver's Ed whoo hoo I love speeding! But onto your song, this is really great. I wish I could hear your songs, you should think about recording them and sending them to me! That would rock! :)

I'm loving it. Lol.. stupid MacDonalds.. anyway.. This would make a good song, maybe I'll be hearing it on the radio one day! I love the "I need help" songs. Great work here.

I'll catch you! A great "cry out for help" song. We need more of those because no one likes to admit they need help these days. *claps* Great Job!

Again with my praise...this is exelent...keeps it up...
ANNA

wow this is so incredibly relatable... ooh its going on my favorites!

oo wow! Catchy, and I could hear the words sung.. beautiful.

Loved it! Everything you write is so lyrical...there was one stanza that i liked the most but my browser window just closed =(
Well, great job with this one and thank you so much for the reviews.

This is great...really good...

Yes, it's me (KaseyLovesNoOne) and I love your song! Hm I haven't really written anything since "mesmerized"... But anyway back to you... It was awsome and the idea was pretty original!