This seems more about religeon the more I read it, just an interpretation.

Short and sweet, I liked the quick depiction... it was like a preview into an empty painful world of another. Good work!

Yes you can... if you can't reach their stars make your own!
Great poem

short and sweet i like it!

Aww. . A beautiful poem. I love the "I want to touch the moon, but I cannot reach the stars without your love". Fantastic line.