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Megan-TheWriter 2007-02-10 ch 11,	abuseI like this. It's cute. And pretty hilarious too. One thing that bugged me was some of the dialogue though...It's crowded together sometimes. You'll start a paragraph with one person speaking and finish it with another person speaking and it gets confusing as to who's saying what sometimes. Other than that, no real critisisms. I quite like it :) Write more soon? -Megan
frackandbonechick 2006-12-27 ch 1,	abusehehehe Hey Gurl, i'm from the good old NZ and reading this chapter was hilarious, i understood all of the lingo, and i even have their accents in my head (or what i would think they would sound like, my partner is australian so i'm kinda using his voice too...lol) I'm loving it so far, ok so now i'm off to read the rest Cheers, Michelle
tash`d 2006-12-06 ch 11, anon.	abuseplez update soon! i really enjoy reading ur stories... feel free 2 update ur otha stories as well...
Fay 2006-12-04 ch 3, anon.	abuseGood chapter and a good introduction to Chole. Your dialogue is sharp and witty and you seem to have created a character we can like for being sassy and down to earth instead of a Julia Roberts in Notting Hill character who was a bit insipid and spoilt if we're been truthful! I hope Chole lives up to expectations!
Fay 2006-12-04 ch 2, anon.	abuseYou're back! I used to read your stories when I was at sixth form a couple of years ago and I loved them all. Now I'm all grown up, married and work in accounts but today I was bored and decided to have a look into the past and it turns out you're still going strong! This was a story you hadn't worked on much back then but I have to say I'm only two chapters in and it looks like it will shape up nicely. Keep it up if you can, you're a very talented writer!
Emma 2006-10-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm Australian, and I think I'm utterly pathetic. I didn't even know what half of the Aussie slang meant. Darn, it really shows that I'm a city girl. I loved the fic though; I can't wait to read the other chapters you have posted.
FutureWriter 2006-10-25 ch 11,	abuseYes! You're back! I'm glad things are calming down somewhat. I know what college (uni) can entail, and it's a lot of work and not much downtime. I really missed your stories, though. I was thrilled to see you'd updated this one especially. Great job on the sheep shearing descriptions. I could actually picture what was going on. You put a lot of work into this chapter, and it showed. And I especially love a shirtless, sweaty Jesse. And so does Chloe. They are so different, it will be very interesting to see how Jesse reacts if Chloe starts to pursue him. I'm really excited you're back, and I can't wait for an update of R+J Revisited! You have to keep writing, you're too good not to do it!
Caitlin 2006-10-24 ch 11, anon.	abusemy god.. this story keeps getting sweeter and sweeter!! good luck with your exams! I have my finals this week! yay... lol, keep writing! Caitlin
philosophy.on.acid 2006-10-24 ch 11,	abuseomg, tee hee hee! this so cute! I love the characters, and the way you write about them, bringing in different parts of their personalities seperately, so the reader isn't overloaded. I love the attraction, and the way it develops in a very realistic way. I can see all of this happeneing. And, I must say I think Jesse sounds (DROOP DEAD GORGEOUS!) adorable. He seems like a real swetheart. Update soon, please!
Vi c Pope 2006-10-23 ch 11, anon.	abuseHey! i've been reading all our ur stories for ages and have been waiting for you to update! man is embarassing how addicted to this sight I am... anyway, nice chapter! An im definately looking forward to the next cahpter fo romeo and juliet revisited as that has got to be my fave, that or savannah... anyways update soon deary!
dark alleys and cable cars 2006-10-22 ch 11,	abusehoney i have my hsc english modules exam tomorrow, and yet im here reading your amazing story. duh i want you to continue
dark alleys and cable cars 2006-07-15 ch 2,	abuseLol Keith Hedger Love it
Kjersti 2006-07-12 ch 10, anon.	abuseI love this story! :) It's absolutely great. I really want to visit Australia now... Although "hot, dusty and dry" isn't exactly what I'm used to, coming from the wettest city in Europe an' all, where ignorant tourists expect to see polar bears and penguins walking in the street because of our placement at the top of the map (read: it would be cold here if not for the Gulf stream).Meh. I like it here anyway. :DAnyway - can't wait to read more! This story is great! :)
FutureWriter 2006-07-11 ch 10,	abuseWow. I seriously thought the chapter update e-mail was wrong when I saw it. I am SO glad there was a new chapter of this even though I forgot what it was about. I have to go back and reread it. I just hope you continue with it because I really think this could be a great story. PLEASE, keep writing! I want to see what happens with Jesse and Chloe. :)
social darwinism 2006-07-11 ch 8, anon.	abuseWhee! If you have any horsey questions, you can ask me. Ive had horses for the last 14 years. I'm a team roper by trade, but I have also done jumping, tons of cow work (I'm an Arizona ranch girl) and some eventing stuff.

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