*thunderous applause* w00t!! sweet story.

:) CD

This is like... a fantasy Anastasia. But cooler.

:) CD

XD i betcha she's Marja or Kyube.

:) CD

In the early days, i loved Destiny changes, it was funny, it had great fantasy writing--but in the later chapters there is a small flaw. dont get me wrong i love the story, its great but it drags on a little. Knife is a great charactor and sorta reminds me of Roy from super smash bros melee.

Anyway, towards the end, my energy and concentration on the story sorta withered...maybe you could revise it for the revised version and take out some of the confusing stuff. *some of this fantasy stuff makes my head spin...*

Destiny Changes is great stuff! Go Tally!

-James the Destroyer

love the pocket full of darts and the kicking of knif's shins. The characters are realy good.

OMG... Woah. I have nothing to say to this. I can't think of anything to say this. There are no translateable words in the language of English, to say how good this book was. Only in Martian-7: gloopgloop bap poya!

WAHO YAY! What a great story! I am so proud of you! Nice.

Ah!

Sorry sorry sorry sorry! It's been soo long. I am not writing this at my computer, in fact I have my back to Mayaj's computer, telling her what to write. Great chapter, I love the word: Pompousflufbag, it's perfect for decribing my cat!

Yay! I love happy endings! And Idra was Seridrani! It was so sweet when Odin proposed to her , I was like 'bless!'. And I love Marja's love of money, and I wanna 'hear' her sing! 'Oracles have a poor sense of time, but at least this one had a good eye for jewelry' hehehe. Anyho I better be off now, I'm in a library and they freak me out. I'll definitely be reading the next story asap!

wow...you seriously took me by surprise i had entirely forgotten about the reason this whole story began. Great story.

AGA...THAT WAS SOO GOOD!! Wow...it was a long journey but you did it! I didn't know you were writing another book for DC. Hm...are you? Or did you mean another story 'next book' kind of thing. Well if you are - that should be really fun! I loved the chemistry between Idra and Odin here. And I loved how Knife and Odin acted together too. Yep, yep I loved it all! I hope you updater 'No Wings With Which to Fly' later on too. Now that you finished the first book for this. Oh - and please read The Realm of Rain on my other name whenever you find the time. Ah...I still can't believe this is done - I SO LOVED IT!

I couldnt resist just saying how absolutely awesome this book is, AND YOU HAVE FINISHED IT! You should revise and publish. I would buy itHehe Sir Knife :)

But this means there is no more DC, and that is a tragedy! WHAT WILL I READ NOW!

But well done you. Awesome.

Nice ending, and not too sappy. I have only one complaint. It could be read into the story that the reason Odin only proposed to Idra after he found out she was the princess was because of class-consciousness and that makes their love less touching. I would have had him propose before, to make his love more selfless? You understand what I mean.

The princess thing was a LITTLE too convenient as well- she just HAPPENED to be the princess. I know it is a nice touch, and it makes everything perfect, but STILL!!

Did he see her face in his dreams? Did it get mentioned? If it did, why didnt he recognise her as the princess? or what? I am confused. Could be because I read the early chapters...last year!? So yehMy problem aout changing the orderof the proposal is that the chapter flows nicely and it is sweet. I wouldnt change the dialogue or anything.

I would have liked to see more about Idra's backstory. You only put it in a few sentences, when it could have been more moving...a bit of an information overload, too.But I am picking straws. The chapter was so awesome, and it wasnt sappy, it was just really really lovely, and now I have a warm fuzzy feeling. The ending was right, too, *accolades*

So dont change it, because it is good how it is, but you know me. I always try and nitpick your stories, because there are no big faults to pick at. Plus, I try and give you honest reviews...

Wow, that was great! I love the way Odin acts when he's nervous or embarrassed. He's so cute, drawing circles in the dirt and all that stuff.What a good story. I can't believe it's over. Thank you thank you thank you!