Aaw. Poor Emily, and cute Roman calling her. For some reason Emily is my least favourite character, but then the girls always are, so it's nothing personal to Emily- the boys just seem more interesting maybe.
And I love this line:
'her heart pounding like an insane hamster trying to headbutt its way out of her chest.' Ha ha.

I really like this insight into Roman. I like how he's getting attached to people because he seemed so lonely before. :-( Go Roman!

Roman has always been a very interesting character to me, but I think this is my favorite Roman chapter.

:) CD

I don't have enough free time to keep reading, but I find the story very entertaining. The characters are all very distinct and interesting, and I can almost imagine running into them in real life. Almost. These first eight chapters have been very entertaining, and I really love the attention to detail that you provide for your readers. It makes it quite a bit easier, and, because you haven't been overpowering it, helps us readers get into the story. I really do intend to read more later. Very good. I'm interested in seeing where this story is going.

Gah. Gorgeous. Seriously. Possibly best insight into a character I've ever read. Gah. Wow. Roman..!

Gah, poor Van...! So good at hurting himself... But YAY Van and Christian time!!

Is this like a show or something because eveyone's saying how someone is so hot is this a fanfic?

It continually shocks me when I try to compare Cayn's Van with Christian's Van (for lack of a way to differentiate them in my head)... but I like both of them.

:) CD

Yay! Love Van and Dice. They're so great. And poor Roman. Can't wait for more.

Gah did I NEED THIS. Double dose of Van and Dice. Van is so cool~ and not. :D Poor Dice...!

-giggle-

-blink- format of review is different. ANYway, that was awesome. Van and Dice play off each other so well...

:D CD

Aww... I never guessed that would happen but it rather makes sense. I love it!! Ee Roman being cute.

:D CD

Oy oyoyoyoyoy Oscar...!! Roman...! ABBOTS!

OHNO! nononoROMAN THERE IS A ROMAN BAD LYRA!

I cannot comment enough on how I love your dialogue. It's hillarious.