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| Hobbit Heart 2008-11-06 ch 52,   | Yay! Love Van and Dice. They're so great. And poor Roman. Can't wait for more. |
| Mayaj 2008-10-25 ch 52, | Gah did I NEED THIS. Double dose of Van and Dice. Van is so cool~ and not. :D Poor Dice...! |
| Casey Drake 2008-10-23 ch 52, | -giggle- -blink- format of review is different. ANYway, that was awesome. Van and Dice play off each other so well... :D CD |
| Casey Drake 2008-10-05 ch 51, | Aww... I never guessed that would happen but it rather makes sense. I love it!! Ee Roman being cute. :D CD |
| Mayaj 2008-10-05 ch 51, | Oy oyoyoyoyoy Oscar...!! Roman...! ABBOTS! |
| Mayaj 2008-10-05 ch 50, | OHNO! nononoROMAN THERE IS A ROMAN BAD LYRA! |
| Hobbit Heart 2008-10-05 ch 18, | I cannot comment enough on how I love your dialogue. It's hillarious. |
| Hobbit Heart 2008-10-05 ch 13, | This is great. I have to say, I just love the conversations between Dice and Van. It makes me laugh. Great story so far. Love "Quit tryin'a strip me, you nancy!" |
| Casey Drake 2008-10-04 ch 50, | -nod- most definitely. :) CD |
| Casey Drake 2008-09-08 ch 49, | Nervous skinny guy with the hat... well, that could mean Mr. Smith Goes to Washington or Shop Around the Corner, I suppose... Since in Harvey he's not nervous at all, really. Neehee Dice and Christian and Van all being cute. Makes my day! :) CD |
| Mayaj 2008-09-08 ch 49, | M lovely. So cute. :hug: God I love the three of them. :D hee, tall nervous skinny guys for the win! |
| vinny2 2008-09-01 ch 1, | I see that this story was uploaded some time ago, so I guess fictionpress had different style of formatting at the time. I'm used to stories in which each paragraph is separated by a blank space. I'm not seeing that here, so that took away part of my enjoyment, but I can't really blame you as a writer for that. You know what? I like Howard. I don't care what anyone says. Talking to one's self in a perfectly logical way to muddle throw one's thoughts. Right now, he's my favorite character. Then again, I've only read 1/48 of the story. The plot is still vague on me, but it's kept me interested. Sometimes I get tired if someone skits around the main plot for too long. Although I don't know what's going on exactly, I'm willing to read on to find out, as long as it's revealed eventually. The writing is the single best part of the chapter. Even though I don't know where this story is going, at least I know where it is. Not a very enlightening room. Weather conditions added. I like this. I really like this. |
| Casey Drake 2008-08-30 ch 48, | eehee... I wonder what Christian said to Van... =D CD |
| Mayaj 2008-08-29 ch 48, | Oh wonderful I needed this. The beginning nearly made me wanna cry though! POOR DICE!! |
| Casey Drake 2008-08-21 ch 47, | Dumb... oh right, because she thought that Peter was Roman's son. Neehee. :) CD |