So twisted compared to the heading. so cool! actually, i take that back, it gives a new meaning to the name. well done! wow... it gives a whole new dimension. cool!

I can see the frustration in this poem. Really good.

so original...the game play is just great especially the way you express it...love the ending...i'm weird, i guess, i love poems that have such a strong ending and especially when they say goodbye...love this. lots of love ~AllyCred~

I love the whole Game play idea, truly original.*Lady Solitaire*

I like the metaphor to a game. I think about that a lot and this poem only made it a little clearer. I defenitely like your outlook, or the way you write. I look forward to more because I can tell there's a story...

Wow...I'm really moved by this poem. This is exactly how I feel about someone right now.

Another great poem. You write very well

great poem, raw emotion.

wow. I like your style. Its a really good poem, powerful without seeming over done. very good.