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| AJ89 2008-08-02 ch 21, anon. | abuseGotta say it since its been driving me nuts. They way you write your questions is annoying as hell. '"Question," whoever said it?' That's not gramatically correct and as anal as it is, it makes me cringe and not want to read any further. Its much easier to read: '"Question?" whoever said it.' Just thought I'd let you know. Love the story though... |
| wolf-of-the-dark-night 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseHello, I have read your story numerous times, and I even own a copy of the book, and I love it! As i was reading it this last time, I noticed some gramatical errors in spelling, and double words and such, if you are interested, I can give you a list of the ones that I found. I dont know if this can be of any use to you, but it might come in handy if you do a second printing or something. You're welcome to send me a private message or reply if you would like me to send you those possible errors that I found... E |
| X-Romantic-X 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseWhats it about? |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2007-08-20 ch 38, | abuseOMG tis story is TRULY amzing. |
| bamagirl 2007-08-18 ch 38, anon. | abuseJust wanted to say that I loved this story!! bravo! |
| 0.0 NightRiders 0.0 2007-08-16 ch 23, | abusefabulous!! |
| Tempest116 2007-04-14 ch 38, | abuseGreat story, I enjoyed reading it. I admire Mac's character she's a strong woman. I like to read story with strong female characters. There's too many stories here on fp with girls with no confidence and are very shy *rolls eyes* This book was definately a breath of fresh air. |
| Angel-Aray 2007-03-20 ch 38, | abuseAll I can say is...wow...amazing. I usually dont like western type stories and like more fantasy type stories...but since the first chapter i was...sucked in. Thank you for writting so beautifully :D |
| anon 2007-01-25 ch 38, anon. | abuseTake it of Why would people buy it if they could read it here?! (great story btw) |
| youpin 2006-12-30 ch 2, | abuseEXCELLENT STORY. |
| Strangely Natural 2006-12-18 ch 38, | abuseBIG APPLAUSE! My goodness what satisfying book! Such a beautiful couple, SO glad things worked out for them, and that the loose ends are tied up. One of my new favorites to treasure always! Congrats on the publishing, hope the sales stay high for a long time. Please update soon, on your knew stories, can't wait for more of your skillfully woven sagas. |
| frackandbonechick 2006-09-22 ch 38, | abuseIt took me days to read this story, but it was well worth it. This story was absolutely amazing, i don't usually read stories like this but i was hooked straight from the start. I loved it! |
| ann 2006-03-22 ch 38, anon. | abuseA great story! I would advise to write a summary so even more people will read it. |
| The name's Roz 2006-02-20 ch 38, | abuseWow! This story was FANTASTIC! |
| Nerdette 2006-01-14 ch 34, | abuseI really loved it! But I can't believe so little people have reviewed it. |