Very good. But it seems like it should be longer, we have to know what happens to her, whether she gets to America. :)
~ Tempest Epilogue (Rethie)

I don't know much about Russia, but why does Natasha want to leave so badly? What's wrong with Russia, so she would want so badly to "escape" to America.?
Good descriptions, not dragging at all (I hate descriptions that drag)
Come one! Does she make it to America or not??

Very nicely done, a beautiful peice of work. Tey to explain Natasha more, i could picture everything from the snow to the skating and apartment, but you might want to continue this; make it longer. You might want to put this in different catagories too, not just General, G, General/Angst
Great Job ^_~
~Max W.~