I'm reviewing, but the dealine's long past. Anywho... I liked Joel's speech.

Here's another.. do a typo check!

You've already got it done, so input doesn't matter so much and isn't super critical. But anyway... me likes!

Nice start. Low on last names, eh? http://w.surnameweb.org/index2.htm?cxc=427835 Go there if you need last names. I find it to be quite useful.

good ending. joel's profession of love sounded too good to be spur of the moment, but it was really great. i liked it a lot. i'm submitting my edited chapters of my story tonight if you want to check that. it's from rissa's pov. write some more stuff for me to read! :-)

Yay! sap!

Aw, poor baby can't get any reviews :~( Ha. Nice climax.

it's a little reminiscent of Footloose, but you write it well and believably. your dialogue makes the characters realistic. good job! i'm eager to hear what's next.

Hrmf... Good use of background building, there. You might wanna tie in some of that info earlier on in the story, but, yeah. Whenever I hafta get something inby a deadline, I just lower my standards...

This is a good chapter. If i'd suggest anything, I'd suggest putting in some background about Rebecca and Joel. How'd they meet, fall in love, etc., etc.
You hafta go and get Epidemic's album, it's awesome. I'm glad to hear that SOMEBODY actually recognised some of the other bands I listen to!

hm... This is a neat start. This would make a very neat story. Are you going to put it in story format, or just keep it as a play? Whatever you do, this is good, I wanna read more!