| Reviews for The Powers That Be |
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Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 9/10/04 . chapter 4I'm reviewing, but the dealine's long past. Anywho... I liked Joel's speech. |
Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 9/10/04 . chapter 3Here's another.. do a typo check! |
Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 9/10/04 . chapter 2You've already got it done, so input doesn't matter so much and isn't super critical. But anyway... me likes! |
Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 9/10/04 . chapter 1Nice start. Low on last names, eh? . ?cxc427835 Go there if you need last names. I find it to be quite useful. |
YeuxBrillants 4/29/04 . chapter 5good ending. joel's profession of love sounded too good to be spur of the moment, but it was really great. i liked it a lot. i'm submitting my edited chapters of my story tonight if you want to check that. it's from rissa's pov. write some more stuff for me to read! :-) |
CW-nerd-12 4/27/04 . chapter 5Yay! sap! |
CW-nerd-12 4/27/04 . chapter 4Aw, poor baby can't get any reviews :( Ha. Nice climax. |
YeuxBrillants 4/27/04 . chapter 4it's a little reminiscent of Footloose, but you write it well and believably. your dialogue makes the characters realistic. good job! i'm eager to hear what's next. |
CW-nerd-12 4/25/04 . chapter 3Hrmf... Good use of background building, there. You might wanna tie in some of that info earlier on in the story, but, yeah. Whenever I hafta get something inby a deadline, I just lower my standards... |
CW-nerd-12 4/19/04 . chapter 2This is a good chapter. If i'd suggest anything, I'd suggest putting in some background about Rebecca and Joel. How'd they meet, fall in love, etc., etc. You hafta go and get Epidemic's album, it's awesome. I'm glad to hear that SOMEBODY actually recognised some of the other bands I listen to! |
CW-nerd-12 4/18/04 . chapter 1hm... This is a neat start. This would make a very neat story. Are you going to put it in story format, or just keep it as a play? Whatever you do, this is good, I wanna read more! |