Aw...such a sweet, sweet poem. Sounds like something out of a Hallmark greeting card, eh? I love it, Carrie! The words flow so smoothly, though I would think of rewording this phrase: "Dear My Love, there’s something that I must tell you." It just seems a bit wordy. It sounds better if you just take out the 'that'. Just that simple change makes it flow more smoothly...

aw...-wipes tears- so sweet...i love it!

You remind me so much of my friend Ireth Palantir...wow. This is faintly scary, how Ireth-like you are. This is a wonderful poem; I'll recommend it to Ireth. I really think she could relate to it. Anyway, this is wonderful. Keep writing!

Your entry is a marvalous Masterpiece of masterful mastery.
If I could choose between having all the wonders of the world suddenly reavealed before my eyes, and reading one sentence of this entry, I would hesitate, and then choose this entry.
Your work is beautiful, and gives reason for the light to shine if only to see it.
To celebrate this entry, I will be fasting throughout monday and most of tuesday.
R&R my entries! Peace!