Oh... Cool! The action is starting! Intersting... Update soon!

Pretty Cool Story

Hmm...good start! Good, INTRIGUING start... Wonder who the girl is. Oh, and James sounds so cute and funny^^ Hehe, I expect, in a matter of about two chapters, I'm already hugging a James plushie... Nyehehe.

Hey... The introduction itself was nice: sufficient without being too descriptive. There's action already! Wonder what happened to his parents...I suppose it's nothing 'great' yet, but it IS intriguing, let me tell you that. I can see potentials of a cool story. Update soon and get the ball rolling!^^