This poem is amazing, I love it.

Being alone in the world is scarier than any monsters you have faced so far. This is a great poem.

Very powerful. I think everyone can relate in one way or another.

Great piece.

Seems like one's become bereft of, well, evrything as a consequence of the past.

Well written!

K

*Amazing*...i love the rhyme its just so fluid and flows well...this is one that really puts you above all the rest...well done...i love it...this has really impacted me...nicely done. lots of love ~AllyCred~

This is a good poem. again you have an awesome way with words.*Lady Solitaire*

have we met before? the way you write my feelings down is unremarkable... i think that you and i need to talk some more..

That was simply beautifull and extremely well written.

great, i loved the last two lines

Fantastic! You write wonderfully. Good work

I like this one. It reminds me a lot of a story that I read once. Can't remember much though. But this is definitly a good poem. Kudos!

Greetings,
And My God, that was futt bucking fantastic. Awesome. Keep it up... or we shall have an 'accident'. Lol.
-Aphotica