^_^ I really like that!! Like it alot!! It's really good and it feels like I can relate to it. Thanks for reveiwing my essay, and no, i haven't really been flamed yet. ^_^ gonna go read some of your stories now, you seem like a great writer

thanks for reviewing my poem
This song shows a lot of emotion and represents a great writer! keep up the good work!

Hey that's really good. i liked all ur lines, but i think the last line should just have been 'with no regrets'. anyway, great work!

just a couple things...
"I realized that truth lied away from you,"
what does that mean?
and...
Hold on to everything you need.
Don't ever lose sight;
Dreams are nothing but tiny seeds,
All they need is light,
And love
And you'll get them
With no regrets or apologies.
is a little bit of a better way to write the last part. at least to be more grammatically correct. "And you'll get them" does that mean you'll get dreams?? ack. i'm so confused
but all in all, tis pretty good