very cool, its hard to find someone who can write action scenes so well! hope to see more.

*applauds heartily* Well done! Very descriptive, smooth action scenes, in fact, the only thing that bothered me in the least bit was the speaking. Not the dialouge itself, but the format. Other than that...Nada! I will definitely try to follow this story. Now I will leave you with one of my trademark quotes.
"If toast always lands butter-side down, and cats always land on their feet, what happens if you strap toast on the back of a cat and drop it?"
Steven Wright