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that is so so so cool...did i get that through?? you are an amazing writer just a totally awesome jobcaitlyn

Thats beautiful.

Message me on AIM sometime at RainbowReligion

Oh I Love The title it's the most ORGINAL TITLE I have seen damn I wish I woulda thought of it. Excelent as alwayslove always~KAYLEE~ {THE BUSSIONS]

That song had the most pungent imagery of anything I've ever read.

Very nice I liked it. Loved the choral hook. The whole thing was great though. Have you ever tried singing these with a band?

Alice

Extremely well done, it is very professional indeed. Keep writing!

Disturbing. Just a bit. Otherwise, I like it. Great imagery, I can hear it, I can see it... and I'm jealous because you have this amazing talent... wow.

I'm quite sure this was not supposed to make me smile but it did... perhaps it's from recently being scorned my the lustful love... perhaps i'm wishing that he and i could have changed roles and i could have played the oppisite role...the role which is depicted for the girl in you poem/song ANYWAY it did make me smile... so of course i loved it and can say i relate to it very much, excellently done

Oh I really like this. Very emotional and nicely done. Also, thanks for the review!

I love it. Very intense, especially the chorus.

I was intrigued to go back for more. Love this image of black roses and vanilla kisses! Very catchy! You play also?

I was really drawn to this by the title, and it was just fantastic. You really are a talented song writer and i really loved your style. Great job

Interesting. I like it. The imagery is nice, especially the red to black and the contrast between black and vanilla roses and kisses. The red to black lines remind me of 'Paint it Black'. The line about the brick wall seems almost out of place, but other than that, it's awesome.

Wow. A real hard-hitting song. Good one.