i love it! that is an awesome, true poem. i also really cant stand these girls. i actually kinda feel sorry for them...anyway, i'd liek to chat, and i saw you had AOL. mine is Canada Cissbox if you want to talk! cheers :P

awesome poem! I can COMPLETELY relate and agree... i love hte format too! awesome poem

Love the noises in between stanzas. I think your right all those kinda girls do wear pink sandals o.O KILL THE PINK SANDALS! (Mine are black . and cost 2.50 rock!)

Pink sandals? I mean, why would anyone actually wear pink sandals and expect people to take them seriously.
I mean, like, what is that all about anyway?
Whatever!
Spawny

haha. hmm this reminds me of my poem about flip flops. but ya know i kinda enjoy flip flops... id rather go barefoot but its a close second. allow my feet to be free of the restraints of shoes. lol... anyway this is good. although i think some of the repetition is a bit repetitive.. :-D

I love it when I see how others notice those... well.. vacuous individuals with little to offer society. Well put. I like the shoe analogy. Feel free to drop by my site and check out my work. If you do, you might enjoy "Puddle People." It's about a subject very closely related to the one in this poem. Keep writing, and even though it's tough, try to put up with those sandal girls. Take care now.