Wow... just... wow. If you remember who this is, you'll understand what i'm saying.

I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY EVEN THOUGH I AM IN MY SECOND YEAR OF HIGH SCHOOL I THINK YOU CAN STILL GIVE ME GREAT ADVICE.I'M GALD THAT YOU TWO ARE FRIENDS STILL. KEEP WRITING.

Still interesting. And funny.

Nice! lol you sound a lot like me. I'm interested, and I can't wait to read more. But I think if you're planning on editing this to make it a fiction story, try to make some of the paragraphs a little longer. The story just seems a little choppy with such short paragraphs. But it's really nice. I like.