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| mandy jillynn 2004-09-02 ch 2, | abuseWow... just... wow. If you remember who this is, you'll understand what i'm saying. |
| Bella Vengence 2004-07-08 ch 2, | abuseI REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY EVEN THOUGH I AM IN MY SECOND YEAR OF HIGH SCHOOL I THINK YOU CAN STILL GIVE ME GREAT ADVICE.I'M GALD THAT YOU TWO ARE FRIENDS STILL. KEEP WRITING. |
| spicymulatta 2004-04-28 ch 2, | abuseStill interesting. And funny. |
| spicymulatta 2004-04-18 ch 1, | abuseNice! lol you sound a lot like me. I'm interested, and I can't wait to read more. But I think if you're planning on editing this to make it a fiction story, try to make some of the paragraphs a little longer. The story just seems a little choppy with such short paragraphs. But it's really nice. I like. |