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Reviews For: The Secret Chronicles of Aria Leigh Braxton

mandy jillynn
2004-09-02
ch 2,
abuseWow... just... wow. If you remember who this is, you'll understand what i'm saying.
Bella Vengence
2004-07-08
ch 2,
abuseI REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY EVEN THOUGH I AM IN MY SECOND YEAR OF HIGH SCHOOL I THINK YOU CAN STILL GIVE ME GREAT ADVICE.I'M GALD THAT YOU TWO ARE FRIENDS STILL. KEEP WRITING.
spicymulatta
2004-04-28
ch 2,
abuseStill interesting. And funny.
spicymulatta
2004-04-18
ch 1,
abuseNice! lol you sound a lot like me. I'm interested, and I can't wait to read more. But I think if you're planning on editing this to make it a fiction story, try to make some of the paragraphs a little longer. The story just seems a little choppy with such short paragraphs. But it's really nice. I like.
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