This quite an intense work, I'm sorry that you might have to live trough difficult times. It's pretty shitty but you gotta pour those feelings trough writing and your so great at it.

deep. man, i feel sorry for you. dont kill yourself though!

very gud, aw, I feel for u I really do, very nice writing, very strong, and I i like the rhyming :P

I'm sorry that that happened to you, I'm really sorry

I think it needs a thesaurus. Its good, but could use some different words.
-Davion

Simply written, yet very extensive. Very sad, but in the context of poetry I liked it. Review some of my things if you like!