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| Redenzione 2008-08-20 ch 11,  | abuseHeya. Ha! I adore this story, especially the Donahues :D Awesome! And as for my vote, Zane, all the way and back, just the way you write the two of them, they seem to match each other better, but thats only my opinion :D Great story. And I can't wait to read more! |
| sk8rxbluexeyes 2008-08-15 ch 11, | abuseLong, rambly, pointless review coming. Brace yourself. This was awesoem. I loved it. I am kind of disappointed about like how everything seems so decided. Like theres not really a way to have anymore who-will-she-choose drama. But once i say that i know its realy easy to have it, and i bet there is some coming I personally like her with Zac. Not zane. Because in my head zac is the way better chooice. Because zane and zac are already like driends and stuff. I hope she chooses zac in the end :) I love the length oh the chapters. I love long chapters, btw. Its always awesome...Because i have nothing better to do at 2:19 in the morning. My friens sware im nocturnal, but whatever. You should make ur updating tendancies go away! I dont like waiting forever for chapters, Because i get anxious, and i hate being anxious. okay, so yeah. I ramble...alot. But i couldnt help it. I just really liked the story, and i have sleep deprevation as an excuse :) Well, I guess since you just wasted a half an hour reading this then i will stop typing, if u even made it this far :) |
| LaughingWaterSpirit 2008-08-13 ch 11, | abuseMy vote's with Zane. Zac is too goody-two shoes for me. Besides, he already has everything he needs. And ther's nothing wrong with her liking a guy older than her. This guy I really like is four years older than me (he's 19 and I'm 15) so it really doesn't matter. Please let Zane win and I will sing of your praises from the top of my local Wal-mart. ~LaughingWaterSpirit~ |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon! |
| Secret-Lives 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseJust wanted to say love the story, gets better every time i read it and i hope you find the time to finish it. |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-23 ch 11, | abusedude you'll no longer be just slightly freakish if you dont update this story. it really does rock!! i love how cute Zac is with Sunny - you should write more dialogues between them. |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 11, | abusewoowo that was an intense speech by zac |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 10, | abuseaw so cute |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 9, | abuseaw they kissed =] arghh im still not sure who i want her to be with though =/ theyre both good guys =] |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 8, | abusehm im sure her feelings for zane is just lust... i hope |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 7, | abuseoh great... this is gonna get complicated i bet lol |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 6, | abuseaw so cute... at least they made up =] |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 5, | abuselol oh yes she will see him again... i just dont know who i want her to be with =/ urgh i hate triangles or w.e you call it |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 4, | abuseaw i didnt get to read chapter 3... it said there was some error =/ but this chapter was good too =] |
| righthere431 2008-06-29 ch 2, | abuseek he likes her =] |