Omg, I can seriously relate to this! It's so beautiful and your use of words are amazing. Well done! QueenVixta x

I love the first half, but I think the second half could improve. I really like it though!

sad, oh but good, sad though...

You have a very intelligent style. Something that's no angsty like a huge chunk is here...but not dumb the other chunk...you've got a unique voice to you. I really like and admire that. Good work.

Your poetry is alwayds filled with feeling, I really enjoy reading it. You always ask a lot of questions in your pained poems. One line didn't seem to fit for me: "You leave me with no one to turn to and my outlets are thinning." The word "outlets" just didn't seem right. I would suggest "my soul is thinning" but that's just me. Take care now and keep writing.