|Reviews for Come Back|
| Starpoet 9/6/04 . chapter 1
I love it! Especially how the first and last lines are the shortest, it really enhances the effect of the poem.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 5/13/04 . chapter 1
poems getting shorter :P till amazin tho!
| catseyeview 5/13/04 . chapter 1
A flicker! I like the start to this poem. It grabs you right away.
| invalid id 4/19/04 . chapter 1
Not a huge fan of these shorter ones. But there are some that get their message across in a few lines and I respect and admire that because that is hard for me to do. The last 2 lines to me kinda just don't mesh as well as the rest of it. I dunno, the first time I read it I said Come back to reality Come back to life. And that stuck on me, so when I saw it wasn't that it just didn't have that flow to it. But, it does have a good meaning, good wording as usual. You are going on the favorites list now.
| Matthew James Current 4/19/04 . chapter 1
Cool poem. I enjoyed it, but I don't understand why some of your poems are in paragraph form and others are broken up into lines. I like the ones that are broken up into lines myself.
In any case I like how you've been through the Darkness and how you now beckon others to join you in the Light. Yay for you!