I love it! Especially how the first and last lines are the shortest, it really enhances the effect of the poem.

poems getting shorter :P till amazin tho!

A flicker! I like the start to this poem. It grabs you right away.

Not a huge fan of these shorter ones. But there are some that get their message across in a few lines and I respect and admire that because that is hard for me to do. The last 2 lines to me kinda just don't mesh as well as the rest of it. I dunno, the first time I read it I said Come back to reality Come back to life. And that stuck on me, so when I saw it wasn't that it just didn't have that flow to it. But, it does have a good meaning, good wording as usual. You are going on the favorites list now.

Cool poem. I enjoyed it, but I don't understand why some of your poems are in paragraph form and others are broken up into lines. I like the ones that are broken up into lines myself.
In any case I like how you've been through the Darkness and how you now beckon others to join you in the Light. Yay for you!