Really well-written, I especially like the end of the first stanza and the last three lines. You get across those feelings very well, and I think every reader can relate to them at one point or another. Sad and beautiful.

Oh my Blessed Father, you're words are mesmerizing, I started at Crystalline Window, and I don't know if I want to read more, i think I'm actually scared of what I might find. I'm not a light reader, I know the power words, and their depths, and I can't even begin to fathom the bottom of yours, I'm standing on the edge of your abyss, and heaven save me, there's not even an echo. You have great power in your words. I hope you realize that both for your sake and others.

Interesting... our most precious moments could soon be captured and exposed for all to see. The next step in Reality TV, bare the emotions to the unhuman crowd for them to laugh at.
While I am sure this is not what you have intended, it is what it made me think of, so I guess I like this poem. Although I'm not sure the last stanza fits in with the rest of the poem, which is a shame I guess, as it is there which you derived your title. Oh well, you're the author, only you know what's what.

beautiful. this was so beautiful. there were some specific lines in there which were just so moving, so subtle, but they just contributed to the overall perception of the poem so much.
"And while my heart could shatter in your presence
I watch it piece itself back together,
Waiting to be broken again." wonderful, a great way to bring reveal and express that certain conept of love and pain.
"But all that’s left,
After your heart disappeared from sight
Is the sweet scent of you..." so sad, i could literally see the scent in my mind, and this person looking so sad, sitting in a chair and just dwelling in the scent of their once was lover.
wonderful, great work. kudos!

There's so much passion in your writing, it astounds me. Beautifully written, each word flows perfectly to the next - the second stanza, especially, shows that. Very good work, I really enjoyed reading it.

M...lovely. I especially like
"Hoping of you to shed light upon me.
And while my heart could shatter in your presence
I watch it piece itself back together,
Waiting to be broken again."
Very nice, I love it. I know I've written similar stuff myself. Very strong feeling of longing, good job. Keep up the greatness!