Since there is no other way to say this... I absolutely love your poetry. *Sigh* I'm such a girl. Such a freak, lol.

Well done, the rhyma and rhythm give a nice flow to this and the message is touching and one most of us can relate to, I guess. You make the intensity and at the same time hopelessness of that love really clear. I like that frame, how she walks alone at the beginning and end. Thank you for your review, it means so much to me to know that there is someone who can relate to the pain of rejection and self-hate and whatever I am going through at the moment. Love from yearning. ;-;

Been there, done that. I know what you mean. Great use of imagery, and words. I could virtually see this happening. Great job.

"Her pointless love/Over and done/He'll walk with her/Not walk away" That's my favorite part. It's really neat how you are able to put reality into a form of art. Good.