Reviews for Monarch Yellow - FictionPress.com

Impressionist 2004-05-11 ch 1,	This is absolutely beautiful. Reading it creates a sense of wonder and...mistique. :) It's almost evil within the child, and yet innoncence shines through as the main intention. very well done.
Mista Mugs 2004-04-27 ch 1,	Wow, I am really impressed. This piece has the raw emotion and amazing flow of thought that I love in poetry. The images conjured up by this poem are powerful, and I find myself thinking that this is one of the best poems I have read. Great job. Cheers.
Just Wolf 2004-04-19 ch 1,	i can't even find the words to express how much i adored that. the iamgery was incredible, every verse was so lush, and the ending was so brutal, somehow naive, and yet passionate. my favourite line was "a sugar pink pin through her sugar pink heart" it was brutal, and strangely brutal,a nd carried through the naviete of the piece. This is deffinately on my favourites list, its so refreshing tor ead soemthing that's this original and creative. i'm amazed.
whyt forest 2004-04-19 ch 1,	excellent. good imagery and subject. it's got that lovely feeling of prose. ~whyt forest~