Hi thanx for reviewing my poems. This is a really good poem and surprisingly that is the way i feel about my boyfriend of 3 months. well keep up the good work.
jessica

very "in the moment". Nice ryhthm.

*sighs* how bueatiful. and romantic i just love this poem. i claim it as my own now all mine i takie from you. now you have to dedicate this to me. i really really really want this poem *wraps arms around Poem* MINE! _ no more yours now mine im takie from you Mwhahahahaha! smile and be happy read MY poem.