Ah this one is very good. I know how you should summarize it up...Awesome. I like everything about it so to point out one thing would be a total pain because i would just have to re-write the whole poem, but it in a different order by my favorite to my favorite but later on but that would just be confusing *realizes this is just babble* Well ya, if you didn't get the point... I love this poem. Good Job

Megan (itsonlyme07)

That was wonderful! The imagery was vivid and the rythm flowed nicely. Keep up the great work!!
~The One and Only