Reviews for One wish
negligible fictional force 8/26/04 . chapter 1
sweet. and lovely.
i loved it.
Kanojo wa ore no Hikari 4/24/04 . chapter 1
O sheez, I'm gonna cry now. That was beatiful. I can tell you really put yourself to it. This has to be the best poem I've ever read.
Destiny's Canvas 4/22/04 . chapter 1
there are so many wishes I want to come true. But I won't give up. And no you shouldn't too.
Leo 4/20/04 . chapter 1
I actually do the same thing for K.C. On a shooting star ive wished the whole eyelash thing the first star out all kinds of that its stupid but I do it just for that small glimmer of hope!
Mistress Mira 4/19/04 . chapter 1
Aw! Very good poem...I'm not sure what else to say...
AmethystTrish 4/19/04 . chapter 1
i liked this poem a lot! i feel like i'm always wishing for the same basic thing. i can totally relate. awesome job! and thanks for reviewing my poetry, i'm glad you liked it.
Kris 56 4/19/04 . chapter 1
I love this poem. It's simply wonderful. I enjoy wishing and this poem perfectly captures that. And to wish for love? That's extremely sweet and totally beautiful. Good job... Kudos to you!