Wonderful imagery in the first half, blending into a dreamy reality. The repetition of the clock line was good i thought. Adds a structure.

Oh, the lazy muses. I can relate...
This poem is, how do I describe it? Awesome!
This line right here, "A smoky amethyst held to the light, warm against the palm...", is gorgeous. I really love it.
I really like your style, if you have any constructive criticisms for the stuff I write, I'd really appreaciate it it. Peace.

hey cool!! I like it! Really awesome. "the green and purple scent of flowers in the moonlight, the softest tick of a clock seems so loud" I love it. :) You did use that line about the clock twice, soemthing I wouldnt have done, but still very cool

Whoa, that's so cool. You're right, it doesn't make much sense, but then what dreams do? Keep up the good work.