That is terrific. I like it.
Thank you for reviewing my poem. *adds you to author alerts*

I really like it jake. Good job.

loved it

This is another good poem. accually my second favorite poem. i love how real it feels and how true it is. i know because i am feeling the same way even to you will say i have no idea. keep up with the goods and i will read every damn one you write!

this really shows how you feel- things will be better. hang in there, *hugs jake* , *hugs jake again* its kind of good that you wrote your way through this