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| the-cliff-jumper 2004-06-02 ch 2, | hey! i like this story...it's kinda a cross between chrysalids and..erm that book with Big Brother in it. hahahah. I like it a lot. There're a few spelling mistakes and redundant words, but those are the easy things you can work out! Keep going! |
| Sorato4ever1 2004-04-19 ch 1, | this reminds me a lot of the giver. it sounds pretty cool. if you continue i hope you don't forget your other stories!! |