its a good story.
i enjoyed reading it so i hope you wont abandon it. :)

i lobed this story i would really like to read more if you write it's awsome!

when will you update this beautiful puppy? this is really good stuff, and i understand about writers block, but it would be a shame if this never got finished. Don't give up, is all I'm asking. :)

Great Story!
I hope you did not forget it.

wow... this is absolutely good... when do you plan on updating, if you are, that is? i hope you are... though i should speak. ive got just about 50 stories left unfinished. lol

please update soon!

hey really gr8 wrk cant wait for nxt chptr

Awh, I love this, it's reallyy god


Please please please update soonly!!
Please please please update soonly!!
Please please please update soonly!!
Please please please update soonly!!
Please please please update soonly!!
Please please please update soonly!!


xo, Jeweline

Well, for a first chapter, pretty intensse and detailed.

A few mistakes in spelling here and there, but it's very interesting.

Hoping to see more plot coming together besides a cinderella story.


~Jeweline

i love the story. Please keep on updating it!

i just read the entire story up to this point. i really really really like the plot. update soon pleze.!

Love it update soon, happy new years

Aw
I love your story!
it is very well written except for the few errors here and there but everyone makes mistakes!

Happy holidays

Love the story so far! Update soon! :-)

i luv ur story so far, so keep updating!